Monday, March 21, 2016

Writing:poetry T1


WALT

Use personification and metaphors to create pictures for our readers.

Personification is when you talk or write about an object as if it was person.
Metaphor you say an object is something it is not and then you tell us why think that.
I think I need to improve making my sentences longer.
I think I'm really good at personification and metaphors.

Tuesday, March 1, 2016

Writing Term 1 : Recount.

 WALT
Use a variety of sentence forms to grab and hold the readers attention.
WALT
Use punctuation correctly beginning and end of sentences.

I think I did well on my punctuation.
I am working on longer sentences.